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Jamie's Grim Tabulations's avatar

I can see that the recommendation to binge this series won't be an issue. I like the perspective and I also enjoy the depth of descriptions. It doesnt overstay but the depth of detail is just right where it matters. A solid first entry and I cannot wait to start into the next one tonight.

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Nocturnal Narrator's avatar

Awe thank you so much! The jump between part 1 & 2 is confusing (it was pointed out to me) so I'm going to work on that here soon, just a heads up! There's nothing you really need to know, it just doesn't transition very well. Thank you for reading! 🖤🌙

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Sarah Rose's avatar

hook, line, sinker....

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Nocturnal Narrator's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! What did you think? I'd love to hear your thoughts 🌙🖤

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Sarah Rose's avatar

The point of view we are reading from is perfect, there’s something there that causes my brain to itch as I try and figure out what’s missing. (Also this made me remember that college has counseling services so I signed up) I love the little details the main character noticed, and the way the obsession starts

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Nocturnal Narrator's avatar

Thank you so much for this 😭🖤 Honestly, that “brain itch” is exactly the feeling I was hoping to give others. It means a lot to know that it landed.

As for signing up for counseling, I'm so proud! I’m genuinely honored this story nudged you in that direction, even if it was just a reminder. Appreciate you and your feedback.

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Hooligan's avatar

This scratches an itch left by a lot of detective style shows I’ve seen that I didn’t know I had. Hope there’s more like it soon

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