By the way, the name Adam - like the first biblical man, Adam? I love that reference because he obviously had a massive ego, the way he treated Eve. God forbid (literally) that she wants to think for herself and know the difference between good & evil.
Adam is Pride itself! Love that connection (intentional or not). ♥️🥰
Ohhhhh you are so close!! I want to spoil it but I won’t because part 8 is going to be absolutely epic. I am in the process of making a more detailed, in depth interactive story to go with it!
I love this adventure type reading. The link to another page was unexpected, I guess it was just a (continue) redirect but awesome. Also, I died.
I'm so glad you liked it!! Don't worry, you'll have your chance to try again in a different scenario next week! 😉
Wow; poor Adam. And what is he remembering? Are we getting a flashback??
I told you I’d be leaving antsy comments! lol
I absolutely LOVE it!! Yes, tiny fragments of flashbacks! Just as confusing for the reader as Adam 😉 Glad to see that landed!
Of course! I’m a careful reader 🙂↔️
Wow, I love how you have personified the 7 Deadly Sins! And LOL - the Sin of Pride, cursed to be average?
That alone is hilarious 😂
Interesting. Oh, to bruise an ego that deserves its oh so well. I have had that experience. Brutal.
Like punching a brick wall bare-knuckled. 😖
Like getting hit directly in the sternum by a Rav4—or what I imagine that's like, at least. 😅
No spoilers! But I’m
Happy I’m on the right track 😁
By the way, the name Adam - like the first biblical man, Adam? I love that reference because he obviously had a massive ego, the way he treated Eve. God forbid (literally) that she wants to think for herself and know the difference between good & evil.
Adam is Pride itself! Love that connection (intentional or not). ♥️🥰
Ohhhhh you are so close!! I want to spoil it but I won’t because part 8 is going to be absolutely epic. I am in the process of making a more detailed, in depth interactive story to go with it!
RIGHT?! You could say that I’ve had some… experience in punishing Pride💀