Keeps getting better. I was fooled, then the plot twisted again. Lovin it.
My guess is that they( not police) seem to operate in a more functional, result driven way - the way rules need to be 'greyed' in support of 'effictivess'.
This gravitate towards both/mix of violence and benevolence; not quite gang, and past general fields of standard training in private and govt spaces.
...That leaves fringe outfits (rare, since thesr guys are very coordinated, connected, and at least above average in any charm school or higher education).
Or - more likely;
Select members of a more behind the scenes group that are motivated (there by choice)... that leaves special operators. Since they are well funded and American.
* do i sense any foreign tells? Cadence in voice? Ethnic spice hints? What model and issues are there footwear and sidearms?
With more details, we could rule out overseas special operators or woerd one offs.
My second guess would be federal; cia fbi. If only for the fact that zooming around openly without plates and 100% dialed in attire would raise attention ( that they could deal with), but they would have no reason to impersonate, to stick out, generally speaking.
The dichotomy between Ben and Olivia’s methods of fact-finding is so incredibly entertaining. The way he plays into the sleazy “flirty” comments to throw-off the sociopath, while she simultaneously surprises him at every turn. It’s beautiful to watch the chess game/dance/ contest between the two unfold. Not to mention delightfully entertaining.
Which just goes to show the sensational skills of our dear Narrator.
I think he's mixed with the mob or something along those lines.... Or extremely high intelligence level government org... 🤔 Maybe gone rogue🤔 in either scenario 😉
Olivia’s internal monologue is like if Dexter and Fleabag had a morally ambiguous baby.
I’m absolutely taking this as a compliment. Thank you 🖤
i will SOB if you don't drop the next chapter right now 😭
Keeps getting better. I was fooled, then the plot twisted again. Lovin it.
My guess is that they( not police) seem to operate in a more functional, result driven way - the way rules need to be 'greyed' in support of 'effictivess'.
This gravitate towards both/mix of violence and benevolence; not quite gang, and past general fields of standard training in private and govt spaces.
...That leaves fringe outfits (rare, since thesr guys are very coordinated, connected, and at least above average in any charm school or higher education).
Or - more likely;
Select members of a more behind the scenes group that are motivated (there by choice)... that leaves special operators. Since they are well funded and American.
* do i sense any foreign tells? Cadence in voice? Ethnic spice hints? What model and issues are there footwear and sidearms?
With more details, we could rule out overseas special operators or woerd one offs.
My second guess would be federal; cia fbi. If only for the fact that zooming around openly without plates and 100% dialed in attire would raise attention ( that they could deal with), but they would have no reason to impersonate, to stick out, generally speaking.
The dichotomy between Ben and Olivia’s methods of fact-finding is so incredibly entertaining. The way he plays into the sleazy “flirty” comments to throw-off the sociopath, while she simultaneously surprises him at every turn. It’s beautiful to watch the chess game/dance/ contest between the two unfold. Not to mention delightfully entertaining.
Which just goes to show the sensational skills of our dear Narrator.
I eagerly await the next instalment!
Damn.... Yet another great chapter 😁
I think he's mixed with the mob or something along those lines.... Or extremely high intelligence level government org... 🤔 Maybe gone rogue🤔 in either scenario 😉
Can't wait to see how this all goes 😆
Ohhh you are so close! Wont spoil it by telling you which guess. I’m so glad you’re liking the story so far 🥹🖤
He comes back from the dead, and he is the perfect husband. Oh Liv, is that a drop of love that is falling from your heart?
This is… twisty. Sneaky. More twisty. A dark pretzel of sneakiness.
I absolutely LOVE it!
Granted, Ben’s pretending was a cruel thing and I was angry. Then things changed and changed again. So, I was then no longer (as) angry.
I need more. Please. Now. Thank you. 🖤
I’m so glad that you’re liking it! And sorry for masking you angry 😅 there will be any more of those moments.
I shall prepare accordingly 🤣
But, I have begun polishing chapter 6! Any guesses to who the fake cops are? 👀
I have my suspicions…
There wasn’t enough time of neighbours to call so I had an inkling before they figured it out. But now… options, options, options…
So sneaky! Utterly delightfully devious.
“Could have also been who he was as a person, which I found to be insufferable.”
I love her so much
She's so real for that line *high-fives self*
Hahahahha you/she really are