Ooooohhh YES! Damn, the style of this is absolutely perfect. The writing voice perfectly captures the essence of a psychological thriller. So many good lines, and the pacing/structure is wonderful.
I could see this being a hit TV series or book series for sure. Love the FBI agent's name, btw. 😉
I absolutely see this! If I'm honest, this was new for me and I was experimenting with how to translate what was in my head to page (screen? 😅)
Let me say that I REALLY appreciate the feedback. This will be one of those projects that I go back to, polish, and re-release, so the criticism is greatly appreciated! This comment will be one of the reasons that the re-release is better than the original, so thank you—for your time, effort, and reading my work. 🖤
Ooooohhh YES! Damn, the style of this is absolutely perfect. The writing voice perfectly captures the essence of a psychological thriller. So many good lines, and the pacing/structure is wonderful.
I could see this being a hit TV series or book series for sure. Love the FBI agent's name, btw. 😉
🥹 my years and years of experience in interpretive identity theft (improv/acting) and many personalities have finally paid off. Huzzah!
I absolutely see this! If I'm honest, this was new for me and I was experimenting with how to translate what was in my head to page (screen? 😅)
Let me say that I REALLY appreciate the feedback. This will be one of those projects that I go back to, polish, and re-release, so the criticism is greatly appreciated! This comment will be one of the reasons that the re-release is better than the original, so thank you—for your time, effort, and reading my work. 🖤